Blog # 21

Dwayne Wilson

Mrs.Alexander

Jr. Publishers

11 November, 2011

Goldylocks and the Three Bears 

            Once upon a time there were three bears . There was the mama bear, papa bear, baby

bear. The three bears in a cottage in a large forest. Papa bears bed was a king sized bed.Mama

bears bed was queen sized. Baby bear had a twin sized bed. One day Mama bear cooked some

porridge . Papa  bears porridge was Hot . Mama bears  porridge was Cold  . Baby bears porridge  was

just perfect .  The three bears went for a   nice walk   through The forest witch they live in . The was  a

girl  named  Goldylocks  and she  came  strolling  through  The forest she past by the cottage were  the

bears lived and noticed that no one was home . She walked up to the front of the door and saw

that it was cracked. She went In the house and saw the porridge that Mama bear cooked. She

tried  Papa bears porridge It was to hot . She tried Mama bears porridge it was to cold .  She tried

Baby bears porridge and It was just right . Goldlocks ate all of Baby bears porridge . After that

she got tried From all the eating and decide to take a nap. She went in the Bears bedroom and she

saw Three beds . She tried to sleep in Papa bears bed but it was to hard. She tried Mama bears

Bed and it was  way to soft. Then she tried Baby bears bed and it was just right

. She took a nap so long that the bears came back home. When the bears came home

Goldylocks woke up and saw the bears . All she did was just sit there and look

At the three bears. The bears saw that some one ate their porridge and they   studied

Their bowls of porridge. Mama bear and Papa  bears porridge had one bite of it taking for it.

Baby bears porridge was all gone . The three bears went in their bedroom and had saw the the

Sheets on their beds were all must up  . Then they saw Goldylocks and ……… To be continued Pics: